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The Dog King

Link to this post 07 Sep 11

‘Shit!’ hissed Mickey. ‘Shit, shit, shit!’

Three figures piled out of a flashy new import and crossed towards Heaven. Even against the rain-slicked roadway there was no mistaking who it was – Billy Bone. With four of them, he’d be worse than useless; at best it would be a kicking – he could take a kicking, hand them out too – worse was the river. Rumour was they’d filled a rival’s pockets with stones and pushed him off the embankment.

He ducked into a shop doorway and peered out. The import was still idling in a ‘No Standing’ zone. A crowd of clubbers had emerged and were drifting away in twos and threes. Billy Bone stopped here and there to speak with individuals.

Money changed hands. Always one-way: into the pocket of Zac Halfpenny, Billy’s cousin and bagman.

Time to go.

Mickey flicked his ciggy into the gutter, glanced towards the club and headed down the street past the tattoo parlour and the all-night convenience store, where he crossed towards the alley and the partially restored ’59 Chevrolet pick-up he’d spotted earlier. He liked those old vehicles, they had style – and their locks were a push over.

His phone clattered in his pocket and he stopped.

‘Bro.’ He pulled a face. ‘No – you’re s’posed to be here. No, Noddy boy, where the hell are you, where’s my money? Billy Bone’s on my case.’

The Chevy’s chrome glinted at the rear of the alleyway.

‘You any idea how many messages are in you in-box? Too busy screwing Jenny or Jackie or whatever her friggin name is to call me. Noddy? Noddy!’

A figure stepped from beneath the fire escape.

‘What the hell you’se doing here?’

Mickey brushed past his kid brother towards the pick-up.

‘Something’s up,’ Gabe said. ‘For Chrissakes, man, Billy Bone is one seriously screwed up individual.’

Mickey pulled out his wallet, folded a fifty and jammed it in the pocket of Gabe’s jeans.

‘Piss off back home. Take a taxi.’

‘C’mon Mickey? Mum’s practically out of her mind.’

He sniffed. ‘She ain’t my mother in case you’ve forgotten.’

Gabe screwed the note into a ball and threw it at Mickey’s feet.

‘Don’t catch a cab then.’ Mickey retrieved the money and lit a cigarette. ‘Maybe I’ll just leave you here for some smacked-out, no-hoper to roll.’

‘Why don’t you listen to yourself, bro?’

‘She sent you down here, didn’t she, eh?’ He jabbed the air with his forefinger, closing the gap between them. ‘To check up on me … Claire, always checking up on her wayward grandson?’

‘If you must know, it was Monica. She knew about Billy.’ Gabe shoved his hands in his pockets and hunched his shoulders. ‘Mum – she’s – those tablets the doctor gives her. She needs to know you’re okay.’

‘I don’t do pretend anymore, bro, I only do real.’

‘Ah, real. Of course, I was forgetting real, which would account for you being shit-faced most of time.’

Mickey raised his eyebrows. ‘You seem to be forgetting something.’

‘Okay, it was a shit way to find out but that was Gran’s doing – not Mum’s.’

‘See, all the let’s-pretend-happy-families stuff doesn’t count for shit.’

Mickey crushed the half-finished cigarette beneath his boot, pulled a piece of baling tape from beneath some rain-sodden boxes and walked to the Chevy. He looped the tape and shoved it between the glass and the weather seal.

‘Mickey? Mickey!’

The lock popped. He slid in across the bench seat, reached under the steering wheel and pulled free a wiring loom.

‘You’re mad.’ Gabe stood by the open passenger door, his eyes flicking between the entrance of the alley and Mickey. ‘And if we get caught?’

‘You wanna lift home or not?’

The engine rumbled into life. Mickey adjusted the mirror and squinted at the street. It was a ‘left turn only’ out of the alley, which meant passing the nightclub. Sure, he could turn right, but four cop cars had crawled by in the space of the last hour. Rumour had it that Billy paid off some of the local cops. No, he’d have to drive past Heaven.

‘What’s it to be, bro?’

Gabe hesitated and then slid in beside him.
Mickey nudged the floor shift and gunned the truck down the alley.

Link to this post 02 Nov 11

Why's it called "the dog king"? *looks confused*

Link to this post 02 Nov 11

Hi Yumil, the story isn't actually called The Dog King. It's the opening of a novel, the first one in a trilogy, that I'm writing. The manuscript has gone off to my agent and no doubt in the fullness of time he will let me know what he thinks. I'll keep you all posted as to how it's going. In the mean time if you wish to read something of mine you'll find The Stone Crown in Dymocks or at your local library. All the best, Malcolm.

Link to this post 02 Nov 11

Wow, that's pretty awesome... an official writer.
I've got a 28,000 word story that I'm planning to give to my school...
It's too crap to ever get published as an actual story, and really, who would buy a story written by an (almost) 13-year old?

Link to this post 02 Nov 11

Well, you'd be surprised what's been published. Check out our Youth pages on our website for some very young writers who've made it. And you're half-way to becoming a real writer if you can already recognise what you've written is - in part at least - 'crap'. That means you've got a critical and dsicerning eye. keep going because a lot of what us so-called official writers write is crap as well. My agent could quite easily use that precise noun, or even use it ajectivally. Good luck. Now I better do some work here at the Centre.

Link to this post 02 Nov 11

thanks for the encouragement, I've rewritten it several times, but I don't know how I would get an agent or something to get it published.
Bye, have fun working.

Link to this post 02 Nov 11

Hi again Yumil, I'm actually one of the moderators for the WriteByte site and I put up some of my writing early on to encourage both new users like yourself and to inspire older users from the now defunct WriteByte page on our old website to move across. Basically the WriteByte page is for you guys and not for old farts like me. Cheers,

Malcolm.